More than Just a Sport

[Giuga10]

A company called Shamrock Fishing Products contacted me via me and my team mates fishing Twitter page, and asked me to write an article for their website to promote kids in fishing.

This was the final product:

http://shamrockfishingproducts.weebly.co...sport.html

Not the greatest piece of writing, and there are a lot of things I should have added, but I'm still happy with the finished product.

What do you guys think?

[MuskieBait]

Good stuff Nick.

[Giuga10]

(11-16-2013 07:11 PM)MuskieBait Wrote:  Good stuff Nick.

Thanks Ken!

[Eli]

Well done man.
I dabble in writing now and again; nothing fishing related but I can definitely say writing isn't easy.

[Giuga10]

(11-17-2013 12:08 AM)Eli Wrote:  Well done man.
I dabble in writing now and again; nothing fishing related but I can definitely say writing isn't easy.

Thanks a lot! Writing is definitely difficult, I deleted and retyped the article over many times and I'm still unsatisfied but it did still get published so I can't be upset.

[OldTimer]

(11-16-2013 06:47 PM)Giuga10 Wrote:  A company called Shamrock Fishing Products contacted me via me and my team mates fishing Twitter page, and asked me to write an article for their website to promote kids in fishing.

This was the final product:

http://shamrockfishingproducts.weebly.co...sport.html

Not the greatest piece of writing, and there are a lot of things I should have added, but I'm still happy with the finished product.

What do you guys think?

Very good piece Nick. Your passion for the sport shines through the words. No additions are needed, efficient wording is effective wording.

You should do more. Like angling it is habit forming, and endlessly amusing.

Cheers,

OldTimer

[Giuga10]

(11-17-2013 09:12 AM)OldTimer Wrote:  Very good piece Nick. Your passion for the sport shines through the words. No additions are needed, efficient wording is effective wording.

You should do more. Like angling it is habit forming, and endlessly amusing.

Cheers,

OldTimer

Thank you very much OT! Means a lot, I think I will continue with some more writing in the future.

[captain2002]

Very well written Nick, solid, direct, to the point. You should write more.

Thanks for sharing.

[zippyFX]

Nice write up!

[Giuga10]

(11-17-2013 04:08 PM)captain2002 Wrote:  Very well written Nick, solid, direct, to the point. You should write more.

Thanks for sharing.

Thank you very much!

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(11-17-2013 05:20 PM)zippyFX Wrote:  Nice write up!

Thanks!