More than Just a Sport

[OldTimer]

(11-16-2013 06:47 PM)Giuga10 Wrote:  A company called Shamrock Fishing Products contacted me via me and my team mates fishing Twitter page, and asked me to write an article for their website to promote kids in fishing.

This was the final product:

http://shamrockfishingproducts.weebly.co...sport.html

Not the greatest piece of writing, and there are a lot of things I should have added, but I'm still happy with the finished product.

What do you guys think?

Very good piece Nick. Your passion for the sport shines through the words. No additions are needed, efficient wording is effective wording.

You should do more. Like angling it is habit forming, and endlessly amusing.

Cheers,

OldTimer